A 'Zoom In Moment' is just like freezing time. It is when a writer focuses on a very small moment using vivid details to bring it to life!
Today's Quick Write Challenge!
Read the excerpt below. At the end, Alfred steps into a world he was not expecting. Write a 'zoom in moment' focusing on the moment in time when Alfred first opens his eyes and notices the vast world in front of him.
Alfred opened the secret door slowly and the cobwebs that held it shut for years simply broke into pieces. The creaking sound of the rusty old frame as the door opened sounded like a blaring alarm in the silence of the old building. Nothing but darkness shone through the opening yet with one step Alfred was inside. The door slammed behind him and almost instantly a world like none he had ever scene was revealed to him. With one glance Alfred knew he was home...Take 5 minutes and create the Zoom in Moment when Alfred first sees what is in front of him. Do not use the pronoun 'I' at all... GOOD LUCK!
